(When the man she’s been ‘saving herself’ for chooses her sister, Ginny Cotton— anxiety ridden, chess playing, nerdy girl— sets out to lose her virginity.
That was a very enjoyable first chapter, and it sets things up nicely. I liked the little details about the sugar on the grapefruit, and stopping to do the recycling, and it was a fun idea to have them go through the early stages of the dating game by literally playing a game... 😎
TJ, whether it's a women's romantic novel or not I read Chapter 1. I've always been such a rebel and risk taker, you know. Anyway, it was a great start and I'll secretly be reading Chapter 2, haha. Great job. - Jim
Excellent First Chapter. You got the emotions just right. I like the idea of playing phone games.
So, now what's she going to do when she meets Pierce and he looks nothing like Steele?
The tension should be off the charts.
I can't wait to read chapter two.
Hey, can I include this in Thorny Thursday Romance newsletter?
That was a very enjoyable first chapter, and it sets things up nicely. I liked the little details about the sugar on the grapefruit, and stopping to do the recycling, and it was a fun idea to have them go through the early stages of the dating game by literally playing a game... 😎
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
TJ, whether it's a women's romantic novel or not I read Chapter 1. I've always been such a rebel and risk taker, you know. Anyway, it was a great start and I'll secretly be reading Chapter 2, haha. Great job. - Jim
I’m glad you were brave enough to plunge into such foreign territory!
Thanks Jim!
haha, you’re very welcome.
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